I had a bad urge to write some so here it is...

I can't stand it no more, the fighting within myself
I hear all the people roar,they could care less for my death

My hatred is booming, it's lethal at will
The closest to me will never understand the deal

My wish to kill all in my frostbitten mind
Is just hidden behind a man who wishes just for a rewind

My elders don't understand how hopeless it is
To try to reason with this kid who is drown in bliss

My flames will burn all who don't see my view
It's a pity how that is only a few

I can't stand the idiots that block my way
They always think they have the key to every day

If I ever had a love it would be bad
Only because everyone I know I make sad

The feeling I own now is nothing but sorrow
But I know I still have to wake up and face tomorrow

But before I quit there's one thing I have to say
Look forward and always know that there's another day

All comments are welcome

Nice lyrics...i would like to listen to some music along...

At the point I wrote it I had no music and no speed in mind

That would take way longer than it took me to write that tho XD

http://www.shadowville.com/?s=living+to ... ats+%C2%BB
here is a beat that fit with everything

now, lets do the S-KaY remox of this song


had some good lines here, and i'll give some more critics later, but it's now 3 am so i'm to tired to do it =P

loved ur ending!
u got 2 bars to much for a standar rap verse tho

Funny how I wrote that at 5 a.m. where I was living (I think I was seeing things when I wrote it too )

I wasn't paying attention to the line count XD