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WhatILacked
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Post subject: A poem to my girlfriend. (Opinions?)  Posted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 8:10 pm |
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A love blossoms, a life is made.
My feelings for you i have laid.
In front of your eyes, i have let you know.
Everything im taking in just makes me think "Woah".
My feelings are true, Im in love.
A love so deep it flys above.
Above all the difficulties in life.
Itslove growing so much until the day your my wife.
We are in this world together.
I will be here with you forever.
The way i feel about you is true.
Thinking about you is all i ever can do.
And now our love must be shared, we are not alone.
We are bring a baby into this world, what a nice tone.
Our baby so perfect, as it comes from you.
That baby whose life will be filled with love from us two.
Fingers so tiny, hands so small.
One day it will grow up to be tall.
Toes so little, feet so teeny.
All its life it relies on you and me.
Its eyes may open, its ears may listen.
Listen to its parents, never needing to miss them.
Because nothing will ever pull us apart, our bond is strong.
And our lives may live long.
We will grow old together, until our lives depart.
That will be the only thing capable of pulling us apart.
We can see our baby grow, we can always let it know.
No matter what we will both love it so.
We now have a baby, we now have a family.
Our family together and heres the reality.
It may be hard but we will pull through.
Because all our baby will ever need.. is Me and You.
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Post subject: Re: A poem to my girlfriend. (Opinions?) Posted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 8:12 pm |
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Post subject: Re: A poem to my girlfriend. (Opinions?) Posted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 8:12 pm |
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heart warming
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Post subject: Re: A poem to my girlfriend. (Opinions?) Posted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 8:13 pm |
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Post subject: Re: A poem to my girlfriend. (Opinions?) Posted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 8:13 pm |
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aww that is sweet and after your done sing this to her http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gtnf9EqijT0
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Post subject: Re: A poem to my girlfriend. (Opinions?) Posted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 8:14 pm |
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So ive done well? i just want to make her feel loved :/
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Post subject: Re: A poem to my girlfriend. (Opinions?) Posted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 8:15 pm |
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it will
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Post subject: Re: A poem to my girlfriend. (Opinions?) Posted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 8:17 pm |
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Very nice poem..... really well written one tiny thing "We are bring a baby into this world, what a nice tone." i think u should edit it to "we are to bring a baby into this world, what a nice tone" or "we bring a baby into this world, what a nice tone" may your girlfriend love this poem:) gluck delivering it 
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Post subject: Re: A poem to my girlfriend. (Opinions?) Posted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 8:22 pm |
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Thanks  , i might get off in a minute though. Im shattered
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Post subject: Re: A poem to my girlfriend. (Opinions?) Posted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 8:22 pm |
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beautiful
she better love it
its rough draff i dont normaly comment on such things as that