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Ponk
 Post subject: Lyrics.
PostPosted: Mon Mar 14, 2011 7:46 pm 
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Writing a song. Any suggestions?

-Verse 1a-
Everyday I see you walk by
I stand there and wish that you were mine
Oh how I wish that you were mine
You're beautiful as the morning sky

-Verse 1b-
You're the one that I adore
I know this could be something more
It certainly could be something more
You're the one that I've been waiting for

-Chorus-
I sit here wondering what to do
Searching for even the faintest clue
And if you feel like I do
Then please let me know that it's true

-Verse 2a-
Is this love that I feel deep inside
It fills up my lungs like cyanide
and if I can't breath then I will die
I really need you by my side

-Verse 2b-
Raging like a wild hound
My love for you forever unbound
I don't think it will ever be bound
But still I'm left without a sound

-Chorus-

You'll never know much love you.
You'll never know how much I care.
And if I were to be without you,
I'd be broken beyond repair.

-Guitar- (I have the whole guitar part in my head, but no way of writing it.)

-Chorus x2-

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BlackRevolution
 Post subject: Re: Lyrics.
PostPosted: Sat Mar 26, 2011 6:18 pm 
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Awesome song dude.

If you make it longer, that would be nice.
This kind of sounds like a poem.

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 Post subject: Re: Lyrics.
PostPosted: Sat Apr 09, 2011 9:13 am 
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BlackRevolution wrote:
Awesome song dude.

If you make it longer, that would be nice.
This kind of sounds like a poem.

It'll be longer. I was just wondering what people thought so far.

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2011 6:10 am 
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nicely made. for a special someone?

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 Post subject: Re: Lyrics.
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firesail wrote:
nicely made. for a special someone?

Most likely ;)

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O.o i can't think of anything better

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 Post subject: Re: Lyrics.
PostPosted: Wed Apr 13, 2011 11:40 pm 
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Good luck on your proposal, LOL. Jk.

It's pretty good.

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 Post subject: Re: Lyrics.
PostPosted: Thu Apr 14, 2011 4:17 am 
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is this for me? :lol:

good luck with whoever you're writing this to.

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 15, 2011 6:13 pm 
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its pretty good. Could you make it a bit longer?

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BlackRevolution wrote:
Good luck on your proposal, LOL. Jk.

It's pretty good.

Oh the irony. I'm actually going to ask her out on Tuesday.

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