Aister He doesn't want you to comment on the storyline he just wants to know what we think about it so far. It's like you guys are intent on finding something wrong with it. I personally think it's fine.
4 pages is not enough for me to get interested in something sup-kun. I don't know, maybe I read too much mangas or something, but it must have at least 20 pages for me to feel I want to read more (normal it takes me 50 pages)