Respect to my homie aister for posting my story in the competition: I can't wait to read the other entries. Sorry aister but I actually liked that story about the gate (maybe it was because I watched Stargate as a kid

Hey nobodies.

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and then Jake has put this into the graveyard, seeing as his story isn't as awesome as ours.

In the year 3040 mad scientist by the name of Alfred Von Halcheter came up with an amazing invention. He had come up with a portal that would allow people to travel between the three existing realms. Those of Fantasy Earth and Mars. But the portal was being created it went haywire. Causing immense distruction to all the realms and destroying the link between the worlds forever. Humans were thrown into the different realms in this time and they were forced to do the hardest thing they’d ever done in their life, survive. Colonies started popping up in the realms as the humans began to restart their life. They quickly realized that they had to also train soldiers to defend their newborn colonies. As they continued to grow they began to tap into the recources of the realms. Finding oil and gold and wood mines in secluded spots of their planets. Suddenly wars started for power over those spots and over the amazing power that was stored inside of crystals. To save themselves colonies united forming alliances to strive for victory and rulership of the whole world! And this is their fate. For eternity all of humanity will fight for freedom and to conquer their oppostion. To be the best of the world or die and fall to the bottom. This is the Battle Dawn!
Tell me what you guys think of this I did it really quickly cause I am currently working on a real book and trying to get it published.. but I did try to put effort into this so please tell me what you think!
Cheers,
~Austin

sorry for the double post but I just love how as soon as I post my story nobody else posts on this subject....

this post has dead.

nobody likes my story u people r mean sometimes lol (glad i didn't work hard on it now......) but seriously can someone comment on it?

hmmm there are some logical problem with it

why are the colonies appeared? I guessed it was countries before. But then why did people make colonies instead of staying with the countries?

and one thing u forget is that the Earth is basically based on currently army system. I don't think in the 30th century people fight with guns and tanks

however... did u look at my story

eh yours is better.... but soon i will spend time on one and (possibly) surpass your story! hopefully lol but good job its cool!