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Jake
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Post subject: Targoon made this video...  Posted: Sun Oct 02, 2011 11:05 pm |
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THENICKRULZ
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Post subject: Re: Targoon made this video... Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2011 2:47 am |
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I have to say, GREAT VID!
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mfreak
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Post subject: Re: Targoon made this video... Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2011 4:04 am |
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Very nice!
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Post subject: Re: Targoon made this video... Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2011 4:12 am |
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gr8t video!! i made a video about battledawn too! but didnt have time to upload it  well a friend send me a link of a spamming screenshots check it out http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X3wg3h7jw84
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Post subject: Re: Targoon made this video... Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2011 4:21 am |
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not bad  just a suggestion i dunno if its only my computer but the words get a bit blurry
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THENICKRULZ
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Post subject: Re: Targoon made this video... Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2011 4:23 am |
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yeah, OK, but like Golden said, a bit blurry.
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aister
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Post subject: Re: Targoon made this video... Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2011 1:01 pm |
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could use a more epic background music, and some SFX...
Like in the first scene, let the whole Battle Dawn run from the left to the right, or an explosion then the Battle Dawn appear.
Or u can hide the name first, just Targoon production. This will create a curiousity in the viewer, provide they don't know Battle Dawn, and watch it till the end.
Then to the sentence, make it like:
"We were once" "a world without war" (showing ur colony, living peacefully)
"A world of peace" (showing ur alliance) "and tranquility" (friendly alliances)
"But now" "war is upon us" (showing an alliance attack ur OPs as well as the war declaration on msg or BC)
"War is inevitable" (showing some massive attacks of some alliances)
"We fight" "for our independence" (showing u are being attacked)
"For our preservation" (showing ur alliance members are sending troops to defend ur colonies)
"To restore orders" (showing ur alliance's massive attacks on enemies)
"In a chaos world" (showing wars in havoc should be nice)
"Our enemies are strong" (showing ur enemy's hive)
"But we" "are stronger" (showing an joint attack of ur alliances, 200 squads should do the job)
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"Strategy" (spam ships, decoy,...)
"Diplomacy" (friendly, hostile alliances)
"Activity" (the joint attack, focus on the members participated)
(Battle Dawn with links)
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